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The leg looks a bit strange. Like the advice you gave me about Black Widow, you could try sitting that way and looking sideways at a mirror for a reference. Google Images also provides a good deal of resources. I think her crossed foot looks a little wrong. If you had done the same shape as the other foot, then it would have looked better. Also, the thickness of the shoe is different between the two shoes. Make sure they're exactly the same!

As for the chest, you made the ribcage look more concave. Instead of having the purple stripe disappear behind the boobs, just let it go over them, like MissButterfly11 did. fav.me/d7b313w

I think for her left hand, you did the perspective very well. For the other one, however, the lower arm looks too meaty and the thumb is too thick compared to the hand.

I just realized we're like opposites. I can draw women with ease, but have difficulty with men, and you can draw guys no problem. XD Nicely done hair, btw.